Wednesday, July 27, 2011
Confounded words and feelings adhere
I try to weave them in verses affaire,
The Cause is not to swank compeer
even dont care for an appealing stare,
Words only meant for athrist nonpareil
And feelings for a coveted pair,
But words are all I have, unspelled
and feelings captivated, unshared,
Hope words will reach the core
Feelings would touch unswayed...
August 23, 2011 4:10 AM �
Feelings are the vibes of the instrument called heart which touch and convey even unsaid tales...gud one..keep writing
August 28, 2011 9:05 AM �
In the cover of small lines u have filled so much of kapok.....
the confounded words & ur feelings that u r trying to weave in verse affaire is ofcourse not to swank...jinx of life sometimes plays with jingles & compells d mind to think so deeply..these deep feeling when come out in the form of words, such wondrous lines are created.!
nice one..!
August 28, 2011 10:43 AM �
@Riju Mam.....Yeah...this instrument speak so much tales very silently, we cant hide anything from it...you got me there right...
@rupi, I have just added a new word 'Kapok' in my lexicon...I always learn something new from you...gosh...its so long time...Hope you are good...Thanks for your comment..
Kind Regards
Neer
August 28, 2011 11:37 PM �
yeah m pretty fine frnd..waz bussy throutta month with exams n file submissions n all ..huh..nw taking free breaths..:)
hey same here, i too learn new new words from ur poems.
hope u r also fine..
tc