Tuesday, February 15, 2011
The feeling inside is nothing
but an icy cold
For the wishes and hopes
that i so stupidly hold
Soon they will be burned;
There will be a lesson learned
But that time hasnt come yet
And i'm still only trying to forget.
That when my heart goes weak
It is only you i seek
I wish it was all for me
I wish i was the only one you see
But with that single wish all hope falls
and no longer shall i stand upon my empire so tall
My tears of joy they stream
when you enter my harsh dreams
but i only awake
to an empty heart...
February 15, 2011 11:40 PM �
A heart is full of feeling is never e,pty ,a heart ful of love is never empty..it always have something or the other to give out...Beautiful poem.....keep writing..all the best
February 16, 2011 3:09 AM �
Would agree with rjshrm68 , a heart with feelings , emotions , love , happiness , sadness , can hardly have room for emptiness .. Love hurts yes , it gives intormentable pain , but then what beauty without experiencing that pain and realizing the value of love ! I hope you shall find that love soon and get it back ! :)
February 16, 2011 3:35 AM �
Thanx Riju mam and Aarti for commenting....
March 4, 2011 8:15 PM �
very nice
and poem full of emotions
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http://iamhereonlyforu.blogspot.com/
April 29, 2011 11:56 AM �
Thanks Chirag...
Hope to find you here again..
June 28, 2011 3:55 PM �
man awesome saying am really touched it wht am goin through ma heart is also empty.......
June 28, 2011 11:12 PM �
Thanx buddy...
July 15, 2011 10:23 PM �
wow awsmmst..! this poem is nicely sharing the shrill of an empty heart...especially the second last stanza i liked... n in that too the last n second last line especially..
just love to be ur reader 4ever.!
Rupi !