Wednesday, January 19, 2011
For this first time I am experimenting my poetry with the situational feelings. Here is situation of a soldier who have to leave next day and consoling his love for hereafter.....Let me know if you like this..
I never want to see those
tears on your face
It will weaken my heart
when I'll be on chase
I never want you to
weep after me
If I'll have death on my end,
I'll be happy to embrace
I never want you to
miss me like you do
I have to fight that devil war
and I dont have life to live upto
Dont wait-up for me,
I dont know if I'll be here again
Just be happy with somebody
whose love can bury memories and help you refrain
I can visualize horizon, filled with blood shed
No place for peace and to rest ahead
I can feel that fatal shells and pain
people resting forever at noman's land
I could be the one too, hushed and bushed
but I want you to forget my identity slayed
If I would die, It would be my fate
To not to be with you forever, I may be designate
Let me live this last night completely with you
This is all I would have forever to live through
I want to embrace you like I'm never gonna do
Sing with me like all of our dreams had come true
Kiss me and Hold me like you'll never let me go
You've got all the love in this world I would follow
I know time is near for us to be apart
but I've got your smile in eyes and love in my heart
I will fight bravely till the things cease
whether its motive of task or my life-line crease
I hope you would remember what I've said
but forget all those memories and relations we had
If I die in field, you wouldn't loose anything...
but I if I returns so we may have new beginning
In either case, I am bound to my fate...
But my love...you'll move....you'll go ahead
I am going now, but promise me you wont cry...
Just give me a hug and say Goodbye...
tears on your face
It will weaken my heart
when I'll be on chase
I never want you to
weep after me
If I'll have death on my end,
I'll be happy to embrace
I never want you to
miss me like you do
I have to fight that devil war
and I dont have life to live upto
Dont wait-up for me,
I dont know if I'll be here again
Just be happy with somebody
whose love can bury memories and help you refrain
I can visualize horizon, filled with blood shed
No place for peace and to rest ahead
I can feel that fatal shells and pain
people resting forever at noman's land
I could be the one too, hushed and bushed
but I want you to forget my identity slayed
If I would die, It would be my fate
To not to be with you forever, I may be designate
Let me live this last night completely with you
This is all I would have forever to live through
I want to embrace you like I'm never gonna do
Sing with me like all of our dreams had come true
Kiss me and Hold me like you'll never let me go
You've got all the love in this world I would follow
I know time is near for us to be apart
but I've got your smile in eyes and love in my heart
I will fight bravely till the things cease
whether its motive of task or my life-line crease
I hope you would remember what I've said
but forget all those memories and relations we had
If I die in field, you wouldn't loose anything...
but I if I returns so we may have new beginning
In either case, I am bound to my fate...
But my love...you'll move....you'll go ahead
I am going now, but promise me you wont cry...
Just give me a hug and say Goodbye...
January 19, 2011 6:43 AM �
touching...lovely keep writing...ll the best...:)
January 27, 2011 7:49 AM �
hi Neer!
wow..amazing poem...
completely striked my mind to think dat moment of farewell of a soldier frm his love...i sware !.how much it cud be painful,..poem iz d overall content of his heart..written nicely to doe with the feelings..somwhere the lines perceive a very heart spoken soft touch that had echoed in my mind ..penetrated my eyes to flow for a while...overwhelmed !
my frnd cum bro iz also in d army...n i wish frm god to stir alot of happiness in all of his relationships..
a very nice post.!
kind regards~
Rupi
January 27, 2011 8:57 AM �
Thankyou mam and thanks Rupi...
I guess my experiment has been a succeed...
Hope to find you reader again....
Kind Regards
Neer