Monday, June 14, 2010
The wall grown full of strokes and numbers,
Stars shone their extra bit bright,
My prayers edging beyond the tattered roofs,
Hoping to reach the destined ones,
Perhaps the messiahs also had slept tight !
My heart seemed to contain the joy of it all,
But from within there was an impetuous call;
"You maybe forgotten, expediently wiped off memories",
But the merriment seemed to diminish all !
The frigid earth bore a flowery supple,
Food never tasted any better,
Others however more callous by the day,
But i perceive it plain envy.
Oh , it felt humble !
I felt blessed !
All pain of past vanished,
Bitter feelings turned sore ;
wounds healed
Now would be the day of light,
Eon of a new life.
I WOULD BE FREE . . .
Stars shone their extra bit bright,
My prayers edging beyond the tattered roofs,
Hoping to reach the destined ones,
Perhaps the messiahs also had slept tight !
My heart seemed to contain the joy of it all,
But from within there was an impetuous call;
"You maybe forgotten, expediently wiped off memories",
But the merriment seemed to diminish all !
The frigid earth bore a flowery supple,
Food never tasted any better,
Others however more callous by the day,
But i perceive it plain envy.
Oh , it felt humble !
I felt blessed !
All pain of past vanished,
Bitter feelings turned sore ;
wounds healed
Now would be the day of light,
Eon of a new life.
I WOULD BE FREE . . .
June 14, 2010 2:24 AM �
Beautiful..!!
Free spirit .. ode to one..!
Lovely lines.
June 14, 2010 2:51 AM �
Thanks tulika....
Its devoid fervor of mind...evolving now...
Hope to see you here again...
Kind Regards
Neer
June 14, 2010 10:59 AM �
Beautifully written :) bt m more into romantic poetry :P
Hope to read one soon :)
June 14, 2010 11:26 AM �
Well sure ma'm.......you will get one as soon as I get time to write.....Have patience and too much patience doesnt rotten fruit all the time....