Tuesday, March 23, 2010
I dont know you but I believe
you exist somewhere
I find you near but you are
I find you near but you are
still out of reach to me, out-there
I can see your face in my dreams
but I cant get your eyes, nose and lips appear
I can smell you but I cant find your traces adhere
I can feel the breeze flowing through,
your long, dark, dusky hair but I cannot touch it
I can smell you but I cant find your traces adhere
I can feel the breeze flowing through,
your long, dark, dusky hair but I cannot touch it
like it is a visible non matter layer
I can hear you whispering to me
I can hear you whispering to me
but I cannot receive your words to my ears....
Every night in my dreams you are with me
Every night in my dreams you are with me
but sooner after that I need to peer,
when I am outta bed and when the sun is near..
When I see pairs, sunk deep, overwhelmed.
I see us together, in them, fully framed
But in just next moment, I agnize we havent met yet
I see us together in the characters of act,
protagonists of a movie set or even the songs I play
but sooner I find myself trapped within my visionary array
I miss u like mates even I don't know a little bout your trait
I talk to stars and
When I see pairs, sunk deep, overwhelmed.
I see us together, in them, fully framed
But in just next moment, I agnize we havent met yet
I see us together in the characters of act,
protagonists of a movie set or even the songs I play
but sooner I find myself trapped within my visionary array
I miss u like mates even I don't know a little bout your trait
I talk to stars and
hope you would be talking like this to me
I write weaved words and
I write weaved words and
hope you would be reading it perpetually
I walk strange roads and
I walk strange roads and
hope you would be walking towards me
You may be not here with me
You may be not here with me
but i try to feel you with me in possibility
Just a little thought of you make my dreams rejuvenate
And your impeccable lighted shadow in dreams
makes my soul illuminate
Just weaved dreams for us I have till day, but cloudy
Expressing it in vital words with blend of emotions,
trying to fit my little world in it, slow and steady
I guess I have fallen for you and I love you already...
Just a little thought of you make my dreams rejuvenate
And your impeccable lighted shadow in dreams
makes my soul illuminate
Just weaved dreams for us I have till day, but cloudy
Expressing it in vital words with blend of emotions,
trying to fit my little world in it, slow and steady
I guess I have fallen for you and I love you already...
March 27, 2010 2:48 AM �
Hi Neer!
Awesome huh...!
Beautiful words have been given to prettify that image!
well mine is ok but why ur posts are appearing after so long huh!:-)?
well keep posting such poems...n hoping to get again a nicer one next time!
Rupi~
March 27, 2010 2:58 AM �
Hey Rupi,
Welcome. Its long long gap huhhhhhh...
Thank you for comment. Actually I am busy now, having so much to taking care of...So hardly get time to write....
I will try to write soon...
Take care....
And keep coming here
Regards
~NeeR~
April 12, 2010 6:25 AM �
I HAVE NO WORDS ABOUT THE BEAUTY OF THE POEM.... RALLY AWASOME AND HEAR TOUCHING
April 12, 2010 11:55 PM �
Thankyou dear.....
I hope to see you again and yes you can share your thoughts or blogs posts with me....
Be my reader
kind Regards
Neer
April 25, 2010 8:44 PM �
very nice
May 13, 2010 6:45 AM �
jst gone through ur blog :)
nd seriously loved it :)
keep writing..
May 13, 2010 11:42 AM �
Thankyou Harjot and Garima....
Keep coming here for the touchy ones...
May 17, 2010 7:35 AM �
Just gone through your writings, you have an amazing creative writing here.Love it :)
Keep up your great work!
Marinela
May 17, 2010 11:35 AM �
Thankyou Marinela....
and thankyou for the appreciation. I have seen your site. Its wonderful, and I will visit that frequently....
I hope to find you here again....
Kind Regards
Neer
May 24, 2010 11:21 PM �
i have to say..only one word..BEAUTIFUL!!
May 24, 2010 11:48 PM �
Hello Neelam
Its good to see your first comment here and I whopeI will see you here more
Thank you for appreciation
Kind Regards
Neer
May 28, 2010 8:58 PM �
speechless................Wow!!!!!!
May 29, 2010 3:38 AM �
Thankyou Ma'm....for your valuable comment...