Thursday, October 08, 2009
I was moving and crawling
and now keeping this track on.
But the real me is lagging me,
hiding and cheating me wrong
I am making the pillars with
base of my dreams.
But its dithering me, withering me
and slithering me right on.
I've been walking round
inside the maze, where no
end i found
but now i am a butterfly
liberated from the cocoon
ready to take a devoid flow
The breeze seems little friendly
the sun is bright in the sky
No more is i urge for but solely
everything is wry, sure dry
To have the rays fallen to my soul
I need a hand having eternal parole
And that just calm me when my breathe
is so fast, when i stumble and fall
gives me backup support....
Well its time, comes and goes
I tried to grow with my
friends and foes...
But in this new place
i am lacking both
its making me sick and
availing cons not pros
Should i not expect
what i think i would have
Is it so hard for almighty to serve
Am I in hurry or its time to be lone
is it engraved so I utterly takes on....
and now keeping this track on.
But the real me is lagging me,
hiding and cheating me wrong
I am making the pillars with
base of my dreams.
But its dithering me, withering me
and slithering me right on.
I've been walking round
inside the maze, where no
end i found
but now i am a butterfly
liberated from the cocoon
ready to take a devoid flow
The breeze seems little friendly
the sun is bright in the sky
No more is i urge for but solely
everything is wry, sure dry
To have the rays fallen to my soul
I need a hand having eternal parole
And that just calm me when my breathe
is so fast, when i stumble and fall
gives me backup support....
Well its time, comes and goes
I tried to grow with my
friends and foes...
But in this new place
i am lacking both
its making me sick and
availing cons not pros
Should i not expect
what i think i would have
Is it so hard for almighty to serve
Am I in hurry or its time to be lone
is it engraved so I utterly takes on....
October 24, 2009 4:33 AM �
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October 24, 2009 4:35 AM �
Hi Neer!
"But now m a butterfly
liberated from cocoon" >>>:-)Awesome line!
Nice poem!!
Moving on in life leaving all the grudges behind and starting each day with new zeal inside-that's really what the real funda of living life..
keep posting likz this
Rupi:-)
October 25, 2009 8:24 PM �
First of all, the look of ur blog is very beautiful :) rather, hatke!
Secondly, thanx for visiting my blog and commenting on the post :)
Now, commenting on ur sweet poem:
There r prayers and questions in ur poem, i hope u find answers to them pretty soon :)
Touched by ur lines - I've been walking round inside the maze...devoid flow!
keep writing :)
October 25, 2009 11:29 PM �
@ Rupi
Hey again, thanx for commenting. Its very very long gaps in your sittings these days, i guess things are so much in flow that you havent got the time for thinking even what you did very passionately. Its been great posts writtn by you but its all past now. Great, go on.....(no offense) But dont leave commenting here atleast. Everything is fine here. And belated happy diwali....
C ya
Be my reader
tc
October 25, 2009 11:38 PM �
@ Soumya
Its great to see you here. Thanks for the complements and commenting...
I was just to change the theme as its very old now, but by the impact of your response i am not going to change it for more time..
About Comment..
Yeah there are the things we face in life time after time, these are the things i m feeling right this time. So i just dwelled my feelings to words.
Its really amazing, see no body till date understood the meaning of that prose, many readers come and goes but nobdy respond on it. Very little ppl comment on my blog although there are approx 80-85 ppl comes everyday. Its really great to see somebody new to put their signature as a mark here...
Thanx for comments...
Be my reader....
c ya
tc
December 24, 2009 8:43 AM �
The imagery that is created not only makes a brighter picture but also enlightens some domains of reality.
I liked the verse. Nicely put up..
Besties !
December 24, 2009 9:13 AM �
Thanx tulika, I am please by your comment. I hope you would like my further posts....just be my reader.......
March 3, 2010 11:36 PM �
hmmmmmm...nice
March 3, 2010 11:39 PM �
Hey thanx neha.....
Be my reader..